Weekly Writing Challenge: Fifty – That Guy with a Label

Perfection is achieved, not when there is nothing more to add, but when there is nothing left to take away.

– Antoine de Saint-Exupery

We can never achieve perfection — we are only human. But if we aspire to it, we may attain quality; we may write well.  So, can you tell a story in just fifty words?

via Weekly Writing Challenge: Fifty.

 

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Wearing Tiffany choker to impress.  He boasted being a good cook. Will bring a dish to her party.  He turned up, empty handed.

Two months together, he wanted intimacy.  She refused.  For that reason, he agreed they weren’t compatible.

Two days later, he walked right past her. He wasn’t alone.